Ignite talk Feedback - Mr W. Halsey

Feedback

• Good topic and nice delivery at the beginning - gestures
• reading from the slide not great but does add to it and text quite short
• Good research- involving and dramatic examples 
• Lack of rehearsal - classic Ignite issues of running out of time on each slide 
•  Violence towards women - a serious current topic/issue - that would make for a good critical investigation 
• Also good to see the other side (strong female artist) but could explore if these really  are empowering women?
• Written English on presentation poor- to many errors 
• Excellent to see topic explored from a variety of different angles - need to do this in essay
• Q&A immediately raised questions of audience - excellent points.... Are teenagers more likely to be influenced. 

WWW:

• Lots of good topics to use for my critical investigation 
• Good research done into the topic 
• showed more that one side of the argument
• The Q&A produced good questions that i can also use in my critical investigation
• Good delivery 

EBI:

• didn't practise enough ran out of time a lot of times  
• Written English was poor need to go over it and check mistakes 
• Reading from the board limited eye contact 
• Ignite points could go into more detail
• expand on some points 

What to do to turn it into a quality Ignite talk?
I could have expanded more on the points such as the female artist and if they actually empowering women or are them selfs being controlled by males such as Jay Z. Additionally, more practice would help the quality and more eye contact plus more engaging.